ang you made it snow,
this i damn well know,
i tried to get to work,
couldnt so had to sherk,
ang i blame you,
jeeez you make me blue.

sarah make a snowman,
cmon i know you can,
ill throw a snowball at you,
and ang ill throw a shoe.-)

some truly amazing work there jay!! you should look for a publisher

ang im only joking,

my minds racing m8

if your name begins with s,
please dont not stress,
im still your friend,
and in the end,
we will get through it
together.

looooooooooooooooooooool
what a plank

Autumn Leaves

As thoughts rage inside, of
hearts smashed and scattered,
Like autumn leaves in a storm,
Never to be restored.
Time passes and new leaves grow.
The tree appears the same, but isnt.
Outside, it seems normal.
Inside, the acceptance of change,
Knowledge that nothing lasts forever.
Sirens blare inside, the signal
that time has come for leaves to be shed
Happiness turns to sorrow and pain
As the feelings of love wane



Dec

Some great poems there :)

Dec! Pool! Play! Post!

i played a few games when i logged off here

i have a poem im saving for when i have them played

this is the poem I saved to post on pool, its there now under the name gerry_sf

Eternal Rest

A heavy heart deep inside,
How long will the feeling last,
Life moves on after the love is gone,
Weary eyes search in the darkness,
Helpless, a beacon of light unfound,
Will the darkness ever fade?
The shackles of loneliness cling tight,
How long will I be held captive in my own mind?
Impenetrable in the darkness,
Respite from the pain is shortlived and futile,
Darkness returns worse than ever.
Saviour only has one face,
When will they return to grant eternal rest.

Dec

Safe Haven

Waves of tiredness sweep over my body
Drifting from this world to the next
Is this really the right decision?
Bleary eyes and blurred vision
Everything feels so warm and fuzzy
Senses dulled, unnecessary.
Earths safe haven from pain
Breathing is quiet, movements slight
Will it all end tonight?
Life returns with a jolt
Senses slowly restored
Vision returns and sleep disappears


Dec

dec i dont understand any of your poems lol

lol me too but im sure there great

whats not to understand?

there is no understanding, you take whatever meaning you want from reading it. thats the idea of a poem, it has a meaning for everybody.

if it means nothing to you then it doesnt lol

Great to see this thread getting so much use

here i sat
all broken hearted
tried to ____
but only farted

The Best Poem So Far Award goes to:

Antlew!!!



Edited at 03:43 Sat 16/01/10 (GMT)

roffl

LMAO!